3 thoughts on “The fun day

  1. Hi Sophie,
    Great post!
    I liked how you included a picture and had lot of information about the day.
    But it was a little bit hard to read with the background,
    Sabine

  2. Hey Soph,
    I really liked your intriguing writing and text at the bottom. But maybe next time choose a less bright background.
    Good job,
    Milly

  3. Hi Sophie,

    I like how you used really interesting text. Also your text is hard to read because of those coloured sprinkle looking things.

    From Grace

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