I liked how you included a picture and had lot of information about the day.
But it was a little bit hard to read with the background,
I really liked your intriguing writing and text at the bottom. But maybe next time choose a less bright background.
I like how you used really interesting text. Also your text is hard to read because of those coloured sprinkle looking things.
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